Politics & International Relations 12

TOPIC

How to confront the problem of land mines

(上記TOPIC、英語で意見を論理的に述べる技術とトレーニング第7章より引用)

Essay

 I believe that there are three primary ways to confront the problem of land mines effectively.
 The first way is to raise money for getting rid of land mines. If there is enough money to solve the problem, it massively facilitates the process. Moreover, developed countries have been wasting so much money on stupid things such as on wars. They should cut wasteful spending and allot the money for saving people, in lieu of killing.
 The second way is to establish the business of the removal of land mines and increase the employment. There are still countless mines under the ground and the removal is really time-consuming. As a result, a lot of workforce is needed.
 The third way is to develop a machine which can photograph the inside of the earth. The biggest problem of the removal of land mines is that it is difficult to identify where they are. To put it in other words, if it is possible to pinpoint the places of mines, it will dramatically enhance the efficiency of the removal operation.
 As I mentioned, these are the three primary ways to confront the problem of land mines effectively.

メモ

地雷問題対処法です。
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