Family 02

TOPIC

Are Japanese children spoiled?

(上記TOPIC、英語で意見を論理的に述べる技術とトレーニング第7章より引用)

Essay

 Considering that the definition of the word “spoil” is to give someone whatever they want, it totally depends on the situation.
 In developed countries where people can get almost anything as long as they have the money, in order to give children whatever they want, the parents should have enough money to do so therefore it is safe to say that in developed countries not specific to Japan some children who have rich parents might be spoiled but other children who have poor parents cannot be spoiled because rich parents can give their children whatever they want and poor parents cannot.
 On the other hand, comparing to children in developing countries, it can be said that Japanese children are spoiled because in Japan almost all the children naturally have foods and water and clothes and shelters without any effort which children in developing countries do not have easy access to. Therefore, I think that from the view of children in developing countries almost all the Japanese children seem to be given whatever they want hence they are spoiled.
 In conclusion, when it comes to developed countries not specific to Japan some children who have rich parents might be spoiled, and comparing to children in developing countries almost all the Japanese children are spoiled.

メモ

日本の子供は甘やかされているか?です。
このような、主観的意見を求められるトピックでは、自分の意見を主観的に書くか、一歩引いて、客観的に書くかの2通りの選択肢があると思います。
自分の中で強い意見がある場合は、主観的に、時と場合にもよるし特に強い意見が無い場合は、客観的に、書くのが、一番、簡単だと思います。
今回は、客観的に、序論でまず、「spoil」という単語の定義を述べてから、先進国と発展途上国の2通りに場合分けして、書いてみました。