Environment 17

TOPIC

Protecting animals in danger of extinction

(上記TOPIC、英語で意見を論理的に述べる技術とトレーニング第7章より引用)

Essay

 I believe it is very important to protect animals in danger of extinction because biodiversity is the key to sustainable ecosystem and many products such as medicine and foods and so on, are developed from animals. Hence humanity must conserve endangered species by the two following measures.
 The first measure is to re-establish natural habitats for wild animals. As the society has been more and more industrialized, the natural habitats have been severely affected. Then due to lack of habitats, many animals such as koala bears and gorillas and many amphibians and so on, are on the verge of extinction. Hence re-establishment of natural habitats for wild animals is one of the most effective ways of preventing extinction of species.
 The second measure is to solve environmental problems because deteriorating environment has devastating effects on fauna. For example polar ice has been melting rapidly, which has deleterious effects on polar bears. For another example, deforestation exacerbates droughts, which causes lack of food and drinking water for many wild animals. Therefore it is imperative to solve environmental problems in order to protect animals from extinction.
 In conclusion, it is very important to protect animals in danger of extinction because of the aforesaid reason, and the aforementioned two measures are the most effectual.

メモ

絶滅の恐れがある動物の保護です。
序論で、絶滅危惧種の保護は重要だと述べてから、本論で、その対策を2つ、結論で、それまでのまとめ、と言う感じで書いてみました。
環境問題は知識量が、かなり影響してくる分野なので、知識の乏しい私には難しい分野です.
でも逆に、知識さえ付けば、データや調査結果などを、そのまま自分の主張のサポート文に使えますので、知識のある方には、山を張るのに適した分野かもしれません。